I have now shown my draft of the production to various people some of which suit my target audience (Other students and older friends I have above the age of 20) . Though it was just the opening I have uploaded to YouTube I have done a lot more since and will most likely upload a second draft soon. Though my film so far had only the Title of the movie in and average music from a sharing site; also missing the voice of the caller. It had a mixture of feedback. Comments given where like such.
"I really liked some of the shots you did, and the clever way it mirrors Marcs"
"It's a bit too dark in place and could do with brightening up."
"With some really nice music that builds up then this could look really nice."
"They way the top of Todd's head is cut off creates and bit more suspicion to the film."
In terms of other general feedback those that have seen it like the title and the colouring as well as the montage when Troy gets changed. Though they did agree that it was dark in places but this does create a nice mood. I will listen to this feedback and produce some of my own music for the film. Similarly to what I did in the Year 11 Horror project.
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