Main Task - Pitch Feedback

After showing my class my pitch for my production I took away a few things.

• Everyone liked the idea of mine and Marc's films being interlinked.
• They found the pitch easy to understand and follow.
• They understood how it related to other thriller movies and how it suited the genre and what convention I was using.
• Some found the plot rather complex for the time period of the production, or said it may be a lot to get in 5 minutes
• They agreed that the target audience and had chosen would be suitable.
• Everyone understood the inspiration I got for our production through the YouTube video.

Overall the pitch was a success people were impressed by the idea and the way I pitched the production, however I may need to remove some plot elements to make it easier to understand.